Saturday, December 18, 2010

My Life

You pick me up when I fall down
I praise Your name, thank you for your grace
then go my own way

You call me back
I keep walking, ignoring you
You call and keep calling
I block you out, I can do it myself

I stumble and fall
Now I hear Your call again
I don't answer, too proud... too proud
I get up, keep going until I fall again

I can't get up this time,
I wallow in despair
You pick me up
wrap me in Your love

You picked me up when i fell down
I praise Your name, thank you for your grace
Will i go my own way?

Will i Keep this song repeating
Or will I follow Your way
and sing a new song?

6 comments:

  1. Nicely done! I like it alot.

    You're not the only one who feels that way!

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  2. Thanks!

    And I'm pretty sure its the human condition to be like that... I mean, if you look at the Israelites, it describes them to a 'T'. A cycle of sin, then God forgiving them and bringing them out of their troubles, then the Israelites ignoring God and going right back to where they were before. etc etc.

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  3. Sure does!

    I'm thinking this poem (would you call it a poem?) might be cool put to music. Were you thinking of possibly doing that?

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  4. I was kind of thinking it, really just wanted to write it out first. it would naturally need a few tweaks and word changes (i think) to make it music ready. But for now its a poem, at least thats how I read it in my head. :P

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